Walking in the rain by Charlie Hill
- Editor
- Oct 12
- 1 min read
In an alley on the way to the Lidl
of a small town wet with rain,
I came across a louring mother
and her daughter, who was piercing
the clouds with cheer, like an exaltation
from the long-forgotten sun.
That was the puddle of my dreams!
beamed the girl, splashing happily,
and as the woman turned and looked away,
I thought how the words would mean
something different, had they come
from her instead;
and then I then caught myself –
jumped into a sodden daydream of my own –
because they hadn’t, had they?
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Charlie Hill is a writer from Birmingham. His poems have appeared in Under the Radar and on Ink Sweat and Tears, and he has been a regular contributor to Prole. He was shortlisted for the Edge Hill Prize 2024